Thanks for the comments Neal. The top photo is my most recent, and I used one of my new snoots to isolate the light on the flies. The paint on the fish is glossy, so I’ve been struggling to avoid the specular reflections. I appreciate your suggestions, and I’ll try them. I have plastic diffusers, a mini soft box, and pocket bouncer at my disposal. I just ordered an off camera shoe chord, so I’ll soon have both of my flashes off camera.
I’ve been using a Canon 580EXII on camera and a 430EXII off camera, but the 580 was used only as the master for these shots. All of the light has been coming from the 430, which I’ve been moving around by hand.
I’ve been having a ball with this, and your advice on this board and your blog has been very helpful. Thanks!