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  • #3445
    Aaron Otto
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    Anyone have input for things to do to improve your writing? Thinking, a ten things to work on type of list.

    #28961
    Rich Kovars
    Member

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    #28962
    Zach Matthews
    The Itinerant Angler

    Write correct English in all emails, board posts, etc.  Check your own grammar and learn from what your word processor tells you.  Punctuation, etc., can be taught, and it’s a surprising deficiency for most of the writers whose work comes across my desk, whether so I can edit it or just in the process of putting together a magazine.  

    Magazines like active voice, but more importantly, they have stylistic needs.  Most fly fishing magazines do two types of writing: reportorial and authorial.  If you are reporting on something, you should not inject yourself into it unless you need to add a brief anecdote.  That’s the style of writing you’ll usually see me doing in magazines.  If you are writing a first-person narrative, for instance of a trip, you need to switch gears and add somewhat more voice (turns of phrase, creative hooks, etc.), but not enough to flatten out the material.  You are not spinning yarns; you are telling a story.  There’s a difference.

    The best way to learn to write well is to read actively.  Analyze what is on the page, don’t just passively absorb it.  It’s the difference between what your brain is doing when you’re playing Scrabble with friends and what it is doing when you’re vegged out watching TV.  Finally, and I don’t say this lightly, but a little bit of alcohol can grease the creative wheels.  If you are stuck, drink one beer.  Don’t get drunk, but try to relax and let your mind wander a little.  This is best used in the authorial area rather than in the reportorial.

    Zach

    #28963
    Avatar photoJ.T. Griffin
    Member

    I agree with this advice.

    #28964
    Aaron Otto
    Member

    So Z keep me honest here you had so many good points, I’m just trying to capture them here.

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    #28965
    Avatar photoSimon Chu
    Member

     If you are stuck, drink one beer.  
    Zach

    Now thats what I’m thinking….
    If I leave that sentence all alone will anyone take it out of context? 🙂 😉

    I write in my fishing diary regularly and try to get some of my observations down straight away. Looking back, its not only a wealth of information but helps me collect my thoughts when writing a piece I wish to submit.

    #28966
    Aaron Otto
    Member

    That gives me a thought on another good thread;

    #28967
    Zach Matthews
    The Itinerant Angler

    I typically drink one different beer or a glass of wine a night (the local farmer’s market/wine store offers beer by the bottle, 6 for $7, out of a wide selection).

    #28968
    Randy Kadish
    Member

    Study technique. There are a lot of good books on writing. Read some. Compile a list of things you didn’t know and study them, over and over again.

    Revise. Revise. Revise.

    If you’re writing for publication have someone read your writing and give you feedback.

    Randy

    #28969
    Aaron Otto
    Member

    Randy that’s a good add to this thread;

    What books do you recommend?

    Z suggested a couple good ones  to me a few months back;

    1. The Elements of Style by Strunk and White
    2. Stephen King on Writing

    I’ve read them both twice.  The first one is very hard for me.  I don’t find any of it sinking in. It’s packed full of fantastic information.  The kicker is, I feel like I should have grasped the content in 6th grade, but I’m too thick to hold onto any of it.  I’ve started my third review.

    The second is a really quick read.  I never read King before Z suggested this book and now I’m a fan.  I don’t know if I’ll ever be able to write with half his wit or common sense , but I’m sure as heck going to try.

    #28970
    Rich Kovars
    Member

    Hemingway on writing is good too.

    #28971
    Randy Kadish
    Member

    Aaron

    In addition to the books you mentioned, I like the Practical Stylist by Sheridan Baker. ( Don’t know if it’s still in print.) Sheridan makes good writing easy.

    Also, I like Style by Joseph Williams. The book, however, is tough reading, but it has things that I’ve haven’t seen in other books.

    A few others are The Golden Book on Writing by David Lambuth; Edit Yourself by Bruce Ross-Larsen; Stein on Writing, by Saul Stein.

    For Fiction (and Memoirs) my favorite is The Techniques of the Selling Writer by Dwight Swain.

    There are, however, many other good books. One thing I want to add. When a good golfer tries to improve his technique his game intially suffers as it takes time to correctly intergrate the new techniques. (This happened to Tiger Woods.) I think writing is the same.

    Randy

    #28972
    Randy Kadish
    Member

    Also, The First Five Pages by Noah Lukeman

    Randy

    #28973
    Mike L.
    Member

    talk about your feelings a lot.

    #28974
    Aaron Otto
    Member

    Mike- you’re right.

    #28975
    Avatar photoMatt Jones
    Member

    I am glad you posted this Aaron.

    www.mattjonesphotography.com

    #28976
    Avatar photoMatt Jones
    Member

    Fat Tire is my number one pick as well, Zach.

    www.mattjonesphotography.com

    #28977
    lauren
    Member

    I’m apparently very late to this party.

    #28978
    Avatar photoMark Schafer
    Member

    Lauren,
    Partially inspired by this site Kevin’s and others, I recently enquired at the college across the street from my shop about auditing a basic writing class. After I found out it would be over $800 I found a retired high school English teacher that would take me in as a pupil for a mutually attractive

    #28979
    Rich Kovars
    Member

     I’m assigning a significant selection from Claire Kehrwald Cook’s Line by Line: How to Edit Your Own Writing.  

    I’m going to check that out.

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